Moment so special!!

The sun rose above the horizon,
Beaming in brightness with a smile,
Maybe it seemed so to me,
As I floated in my own joyous isle!
Eagerly waiting for that moment,
Everyone at home were busy,
Getting ready for that great event.
 
The hall festooned in bright colors,
With freshly bloomed flowers,
Friends and relatives gathered,
Waited till the end for hours.
I entered the hall with shyness,
With a mild smile looked at the groom,
The whole crowd will be our witness.

As he slid the ring in my finger,
Claps were heard, amidst the air,
People around me got blurred,
And it was only us who were there!
Heart raced and thumped in bliss,
The long awaited day had come,
And from now on I was totally his.

There are moments so special,
Always so close to our heart,
Which we treasure forever and ever,
From our mind it’ll never part.
Engagement is a day, which happens but once,
Something so special in our lifetime,
Whose memory always gives joy in tons!

 

Reviews

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Beautiful writing here. I loved the emotion in it the love and passion nice job.. ^^

[Tate Morgan]

Ah the hopes and dreams of all who have a wedding so beautiful are a wonder to behold
Beautiful write

[G. Marie"floating on an..]

Congratulations and this is a most lovely poem. its great you can express these feelings of joy in a poem that you will treasure forever as you have sweet memories of this day and the days to come great poem

[JENY]

I have not yet known this joy….
Loved your lines very much…
Thanks for sharing…

[emmajoy]

What a beautiful poem, so full of happiness, so full of positive wonderment in that special time and the years to come. Beautiful, dear friend.

Thank you for letting me share such a wonderful occasion.

'There are moments so special,
Always so close to our heart,
Which we treasure forever and ever,'

Love and good fortune always.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem about a outstanding day in a life. Few things will stay in our minds. The gift of a ring is very special. I like the gentle and kind feel of the poem. A excellent poem of happiness and love.
Coyote

[A.Lee]

Aww, how beautiful. You captured the joy and beauty of such a special moment very well. Nice work.

[HorrorMaster]

Pretty awesome poem

[Tina Kline]

This is wonderful, it has a fantastic and happy feeling to it, like such a special celebration should. You capture the wonderful and blissfulness of this moment and bring it alive with your words. I love this!

[Shell]

You captured this moment so wonderfully. Great emotion and images make it play out like a scene in the mind.