MOON

MOON

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)
















Slowly, steadily she came up high,
Ensconcing behind the cloudy sky,
On the green grass meadow as I lie,
I smiled imagining that she felt shy.

Thousands of stars winked her way,
From behind the clouds she did sway,
With her, the clouds loved to play,
Sullied her in shades of gray.

She glimmered all through the night,
Looking like a ball so pure in white,
Along with the stars she gives light,
She is nature’s midnight delight!

© 2010 Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)


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the flow was amazing...
good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes, 'she is nature's midnight delight!' indeed! The moon is one of the things I love the most about the night and it has always been an inspiration for me.
I love how in the second stanza you made everything come into life .. the stars, the clouds, and the moon as they communicate with each other in silence.
You painted a beautiful picture in the sky, and I love this poem.
Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I liked it very much! Very nicely written!Good job,thanks for sharing your work with us(;

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The ending could not be more perfect, reading this I noticed how much I really loved the flow of it, the way the whole thing moves in the readers mind is an experience. The vision painted in the readers mind by your words is vivid and unique, its beautiful in a wonderous way. I really love this piece. Thank you for sharing. :)
-Cathrine

Posted 11 Years Ago


i really loved the poem.....!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is wonderful ! :D
I love the moon too =D
and I love the way you rhyme the words =)
Great job on this !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful and I always love the moon.

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a beautiful piece, bringing alive the moon as the wondrous character of night... There is a peaceful playfulness here that makes your words a delight to read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is delightful and grand all in the same
tate

Posted 11 Years Ago


I enjoyed this poem. Very romantic to me. I loved the rhyme too!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)
Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)

Irving, TX



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