Let's Waltz

Let's Waltz

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)




 

Oh picture, picture in my mind,

      Unroll gently to reveal yourself

Glimpse my love that I can’t find,

      Shades of lofty mountains high

Sky so vast and clouds so blue

      Above all these, where we could fly,

Dreams of love and kisses sweet,

      Hugs so tight and a peaceful sleep,

Oh bring that on as a visual treat!

 

 

With closed eyes dreamt our tale,

      Swinging in mind’s boundless lands

Loves album of dreams unveil,

      Moist kiss gently touching wet eyes,

Gently presented himself in front

      Where joys invade and tear flies,

He said “No need of a dreamy dream

      Let our reality dance to a love filled note

Waltzing the floor so swift and stream”

 





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AWARDS/BADGES WON:


2nd Place

Jun 27, 2011


© 2011 Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)


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this is one great, dreamy piece. I love the magical feel of this poem, feels like I've been transported to a fairy tale land... Congratulations on winning 2nd place in the Love and Dance contest...

Posted 9 Years Ago


your piece dances across the mind

beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Posted 10 Years Ago


Delightful!


Posted 10 Years Ago


simply beautiful! i love it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lovely to imagine beautiful to read.

Chloe

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery you used!

Posted 10 Years Ago


wonderful...
reminds me a scene from classic short story...
in which waltzing is the theme....
alas...I do not remember the title..

beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such an enchanting, magical piece of writing, The ending was supreme, captured with a beautiful picture to match. Wonderful work!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)
Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)

Irving, TX



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