Miss Betty (LIMERICK)

Miss Betty (LIMERICK)

A Poem by Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)




Miss Betty bought some butter,

To make her face look better,

Ate lots to look bubbly,

But became fat and ugly,

She dumped the butter in gutter.

 


MISS BETTY----->"BUTTER"











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AWARDS/BADGES WON:



Runner up

May 17, 2011




Runner-up Limerick

Aug 27, 2011



© 2011 Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)


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This is very cute! I enjoyed reading this!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Miss Betty needs to get a better butter..... lol

Posted 13 Years Ago


So cute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute, but I wouldn't have any internal rhymes as you do in the last line.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I've never been a big fan of limericks, but you did make me laugh with these last two.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 19, 2011
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Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)
Shalini Dinesh (Poet's World)

Irving, TX



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