My Love : Sonnet

Thousand of stars bright and merrily shine,

The darkness of the night sky divinely spread,

Their glimmer is what I see in eyes of thine!

Midnight black strands is the hair in thy head,

Summer rose bud to thy lips be compared,

Charming like thy smile, what shall be on earth?

Sweet are the kisses romantically we shared,

To give thee my heart ‘tis lifetime worth,

To Part us apart neither man nor death shall drag,

Growing is our love, in it we shall truly bound,

Few are true couples like us, we shall proudly brag,

This treasure of deep love between us we found,

Long be our life together we spend days,

Long be our soul together our love we praise!

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Such an heartfelt sonnet. Loved the way you have ended it, that concluded the entire poem so beautifully!

[Fran Marie]

a lovely penned sonnet ....good use of the form and well crafted!

[stars are far]

nice poem :)

[An owl on the moon]

I read through your words and just wished and wished that all love could be so beautiful and lasting.. that it always would grow.. always shine.. Dance in the joy of this life together.

[Tina Kline]

A very beautiful, tender romantic love poem. I really enjoyed this very well written poem.

[Dearantlers]

Wow, beautiful! So romantic, and so sweet. Very well written!

[Marie Harrison]

Your poem drips of sugary drops of romance!
I'm walking on heavenly clouds now.
Loved it!

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

A very lovely piece that speaks volumes of love for your special man. Elegantly penned and delicately romantic.

[emmajoy]

The love for your husband just soars out of these words. You've always had the sweetest way of sharing your heartfelt feelings for that very special man .. thank you again for a glimpse of such a beautiful love.