Twist

not really aimed at anyone, just something i cooked up. i dont know if it is realy even that good. hope you all enjoy!

Nothing without,

Nothing but doubt,

I could sit and pout,

Whine myself away,

But you're all tied up in me,

In the best way.

 

You are the twist in my story,

A knot in my back.

My hearts beating loudly,

Like it's under attack.

 

The moon shining brightly,

The gloss on your lips.

And I hold you closely,

Hip touching hip.

 

Nothing I say could ever,

make this all change.

Know that I'll never,

Show you my rage.

 

You are the twist in my story,

A knot in my back.

My hearts beating loudly,

Like it's under attack.

 

Goosebumps cover,

your body so cold.

This cool winter night my love,

your eyes so bold.

 

And though we’re just friends,

I'll keep you warm till then.

It couldn't get much worse than how,

the torment has been.

 

You are the twist in my story,

A knot in my back.

My hearts beating loudly,

Like it's under attack.

Author's Note

Eleventh part of F/A/B/A/P/F2,
about unrequited love and the strain it can encase the victim in. at least i hope it portrayed that. i feel like writing is becoming more and more natural to me, but no one is reviewing anything really so i am not too sure if i am just getting worse or not :/

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[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

A confession and yet a pray worthy of mention!
You did well
A knot in my back is gripping an image...