THE BEST POEM IN THE WORLD

THE BEST POEM IN THE WORLD

A Poem by ShaneBerry
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mabey poems arent for me lol

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 finding a place that is near, i watch your steps, your voice i hear.

finding darkness for a second thought, this life we've shared,

the fights we've fought, the days we cared. 

and if we shall escape this dept,

and finally rest in our bed, 

ill know how bad my poems... suck!

© 2009 ShaneBerry


Author's Note

ShaneBerry
it was supposed to suck lol xp

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Haha well the title didn't really fit. The first few lines were well worded but they weren't So bad. I'm sure you can write much better poetry. =]

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow realy? and yeah debt is what i ment.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It was supposed to suck, you say, but- it didn't.
Nice rhyming, you've got potential, you know.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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It's really not bad! Not every poem has to have a specific rhythm or flow. I love the message!! One question though, is dept supposed to be debt?

Posted 10 Years Ago



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ShaneBerry
ShaneBerry

denton, TX



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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A Poem by ShaneBerry