amour de péché

this one is my renditiion of what frollo is feeling when he realizes he wants esmerelda lol

amour de péché

le feu de désir

l'amour de la haine

le bûcher funéraire de sorcières 

l'incendie dans la ville

l'amour de ce feu

est rempli de ma pitié

je suis juré avec le désir

mon amour pour ce péché

ce désir d'incendie

est brûlé légèrement dans ma peau

translation-

love of sin

the fire of desire

the love of the hatred

the witches pyre 

burning in the city

the love of this fire

is filled with my pity

im cursed with desire

my love for this sin

this burning desire

is singed into my skin

Author's Note

i tryd my best to make it rhyme in french, but i know few words in french lol

Reviews

[Legion]

I like the way it reads in both French and English. Nicely done. I would suggest something different in the last line though. Its meter is off a bit with the rest of it. Perhaps "Scathes my skin" instead or something to that measure. Overall, I like it very much. Kudos.

[ShaneBerry]

lol i have, i just wish i could ryhm better in french, but do you see any mistkes in my translations?

[the_stoic]

have you written this or should i credit you only with the translation part ?? if you have penned this down in total then its a masterpiece my friend !