In this world, War is constant, and the top of the Military are known as the "Blayders" which are all skilled and unique swordsmen. There are no guns in this novel, the sword is the ultimate weapon.
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In this world, the mightiest weapon, is money, and power. Maximilien Robespierre has both. and with the deadly army force called "Blayders" blindly following his orders, he sets out for total world domination.
The story is of his adoptive son Terron, who finds a journal reveling his true identity, and sending Terron down a road of danger, betrayal, and self discovery, while roaming a world that is caught up in the drama and tragedy of total world war!
The Prequel of this book is entitled "Blayders: The Legend Of Zaid And Kote" which will inform the reader of what happened to start the war. you can find this piece in my "Stories" section. Pleas read and review. and give your honest opinion, do not hold back! :)
Sounds good :] I have to head to school in a few moments though but when I get back I will start reading it. I didn't want to start it then not be able to finish and review! I just hate it when it happens.
okay, well since you said this is the only one you really want feedback on this is the one ill read. that and it sounds interesting!! :D
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I like this beginning catch! Love the name of the father figure!
First line might read smoother as "In this world, the mightiest of weapons are money and power." :)
The catch worked... Moving onto the Prologue!
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"In this world, War is constant, and the top of the Military are known as the "Blayders" which are all skilled and unique swordsmen. There are no guns in this novel, the sword is the ultimate weapon." ---- intriguing! I could read this book :) Let me read the prologue now and read the second chapter tomorrow :) I too would want to have a book. I'm working on it.
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