Fight Me

Fight Me

A Poem by ShaneBerry
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Lets Do This!

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Fight Me
From across the Lot he glared at my friend,
on a good note i knew this night wouldn't end.
He walks up to her and spins her around,
alcohol on his breath.
I shout,
Waking the misery.
FIGHT ME!
Or leave now.
FIGHT ME!
I wont back down!
FIGHT ME!
For glory!
FIGHT ME!
For honor!
For a piece of my flesh!
STRIKE ME!
To Hurt me!
Lets see if i can bleed!
Back off!
Get away!
TAKE ME!
Lets see!
If your man enough to go toe to toe!
FIGHT ME!
TAKE ME!
Strike me to the cold ground!
or watch me spin you head around!
As i stare at him bleeding on the ground i smile as i feel my eye swelling up from the bruise. I wrap my arm around her and we leave.

© 2010 ShaneBerry


Author's Note

ShaneBerry
a bar fight can be nasty, thank you billy for pissingme off and makein me think of this lol

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i like it. :D maybe because im just naturally violent but i actually like this peice. no its not the best flow but i dont think it was meant to be a flowy write. it was brutal and yet funny beacause i could actually see this scene. great work here
Strike me to the cold ground!
or watch me spin you head around!


As i stare at him bleeding on the ground i smile as i feel my eye swelling up from the bruise. I wrap my arm around her and we leave.----- dude! loved that part! :D 1000!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very good i cant agree julia i can see who was speaking easily and the imagery is very good u have an incredible mind for details

Posted 13 Years Ago


cant tell whose speaking but i think i get it..sortof but all in all its very good

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was good, kinda confusing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on August 1, 2010
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Tags: fight, war, choas, battle, martial arts, ninja, bar fight, shane berry

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ShaneBerry
ShaneBerry

denton, TX



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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