How To Make The Emotion Of Love

How To Make The Emotion Of Love

A Poem by ShaneBerry
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a scientific stand on love, then the unknown aspect of love.

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How to make the emotion of love

 

SCIENCE

 You take a little testosterone

Drop in some Estrogen,

These chemicals are denizen in the human body

 With the right amount of dopamine

And a pinch of norepinephrine, 

Mix the serotonin, and the oxytocin,

And last but not least vasopressin, to tame the beast.

 

UNKNOWN

Tell her how you feel,

Know that these feelings are real.

Wait for a response

Try to seem nonchalant

Kiss her once,

Hold her twice.

Play it cool,

Treat her right.

And last but not least,

When loves increased,

Lay next to her and hold her thrice.

© 2010 ShaneBerry


Author's Note

ShaneBerry
its short, but i wanted to make something different, hopr yall liked it.

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SCIENTIFICALLY LOVELIABLE.
You catched exact correct notations, excellent poem


Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the science termenology but that bit does not flow easily. I can see how hard it would be to make those very unpoetic words flow like poetry but I think you could do it

Posted 9 Years Ago


aww i really liked this. i enjoyed the first part becuase it was like you were making a love potion :) and the 2nd part was like how to keep that love. very lovely poem. im favoriting

Posted 9 Years Ago


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hehe ... This is very interesting :)
I have to be honest, the names of some of the chemicals are tongue twisters and not very suited for poem, but it can be forgiven in this poem, as they are there to get a point across and that they do.

Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very good write. Liked the second stanza the best. Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Good sensible mix of subjective and objective values.

Adds a dash of amusement and clarity to the mating dance.

Chemisty + calm care equals alchemy beyond compare.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unique. The second part is the best part of the poem. Short maybe but it flowed great had real emotion. excellent read. Good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


ok i love this! awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Unique Different But very sweet and beautiful love it. God bless Thanx for Sharing my friend

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was really sweet. I liked it a lot. Very different kind of piece but it was good.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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ShaneBerry

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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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