How To Make The Emotion Of Love

How To Make The Emotion Of Love

A Poem by ShaneBerry
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a scientific stand on love, then the unknown aspect of love.

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How to make the emotion of love

 

SCIENCE

 You take a little testosterone

Drop in some Estrogen,

These chemicals are denizen in the human body

 With the right amount of dopamine

And a pinch of norepinephrine, 

Mix the serotonin, and the oxytocin,

And last but not least vasopressin, to tame the beast.

 

UNKNOWN

Tell her how you feel,

Know that these feelings are real.

Wait for a response

Try to seem nonchalant

Kiss her once,

Hold her twice.

Play it cool,

Treat her right.

And last but not least,

When loves increased,

Lay next to her and hold her thrice.

© 2010 ShaneBerry


Author's Note

ShaneBerry
its short, but i wanted to make something different, hopr yall liked it.

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LoL I love it! That's great and unique :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Oh, that is amazing! I love how this is written, and the "unknown" part of it is so sweet! Love it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


interesting write
so now that you have fabricated the stage for her to fall in love...
does the man feel love in combining this potion?

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very interesting and unique. Great write, sir.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hehe I like this. I thought it was funny too. :)
Very intersting write. Loved it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This made me laugh! I've never heard of anyone writing a poem on the Scientific side of Love before, I might copy this idea if you do not mind(with credits due, of course). A 100/100 for extreme creativity!

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's very nice and very well written. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome one.
Used a proper amount of your brain.
hehehe
Just kiddin!!!
Greatly thought!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it, it's so different. You did a very good job with creating this poem. Definitely Scientific.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the uniqueness of this poem and the beauty of it. My favorite line is the last one. You have brought an old concept and made it new and fresh. Great write truly!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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ShaneBerry

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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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