A Beautiful Thing, A Scary Risk

A Beautiful Thing, A Scary Risk

A Poem by ShaneBerry

A Beautiful Beginning. A Scary Risk    
I know that i am odd, 
I do not even share your beliefs in an all powerful god.
And i know i said I'd listen,
But all i did was lie.
You tolled me to leave her
That you did not want me to get hurt.
And I did not believe you, 
Until the tears where on my shirt.

You've always been looking out for me
even when our past was still very dusty.
I really hope, that you can trust me
Kayla, your voice is like a knifethrust to me,
sending chills down my spine,
make me feel out of reality.

But, the fear of pain,
the fear of hurt,
the fear of constraining you.
the fear of breaking you.
the fear of not knowing how to be with you.
 
Its a beautiful thing, and a scary risk. 
Such a valiant friend, such a gentle kiss.
But is the courage to love,
not also the courage to risk?
a beautiful friendship,
on a beautiful kiss?

© 2013 ShaneBerry


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This is love! OMG! I really love it :) Lucky Kayla, she got a man like you! Keep it up friend :) and the last paragraph is awesome!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A total and complete thought on formation, well done, great read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HaHo,
Right next to you all that time and now you finally see! Kool! Dumb a*s! LoL(just kidding you know, right?)
Life and Light to you and yours!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved this Shane.
It's a beatiful way to express your feelings AND be all romantic at the same time.
I'm really happy for you :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a great story being told in this poem and it is a wonderful way to let a friend know just how important they are to you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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what a lovely story..overcoming the obstacles to find a kindred spirit and hopefully something amazing with happen..good luck

Posted 12 Years Ago


cute:)


Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good luck, just be truthful with yourself and especially with her :)
wonderfully written poem ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


This a great poem shane. It sounds like she really is the one!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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ShaneBerry
ShaneBerry

denton, TX



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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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