The Offender

The Offender

A Poem by ShaneBerry



Hold that honey close,

Hold her tight compress her.

Say that I am angry,

Call me the Aggressor,

This sure as hell aint no trip,

B***h no it’s an adventure.

This whole world be my slave,

You can just say they indentured.

I can irritate you,

Call me the a*s clincher.

Don’t raise your f*****g voice at me



Yeah that’s SB

My boys got it right here,

Get all up in your brain,

N***a He a nightmare.

I flow my rep,

But he knows to step,

Off the edge.

Boy lose control,

All star crossed over this hoe.

But you can see it in his eye,

F**k his limits the sky!



I’ll roll right off the deep end,

Fall into unimaginable bliss,

Or this unending abyss

I can’t seem to figure it out.

But that, don’t mean that I’m going to f*****g pout.

I’ll burn this world,

I put that blade to my wrist said, ‘F**k this all’

But you voice rang in my ear told me not to fall.

Everything is taken away,

It’s like whatever I do has no bearing Kay.


But I won’t surrender,

I fight for my life.

Fight sweet splendor,

Put it in an envelope for me to send her.


Ain’t anyone going to f*****g touch me?

 Hell Nah!

I’m the offender!

© 2013 ShaneBerry

Author's Note

hope you guys like it. Composed by me S.B. and Wayne RepNificent a local Rap Battle jockey and a friend oof a friend. will post his website if he takes my advice and goes pro haha.

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Great words and strong statements in the poem. I like the directness in each set of lines. No weakness in the excellent poem.

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Added on December 4, 2011
Last Updated on January 16, 2013
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My Chemical Romance “The Ghost of You” Name: Shane Douglas Berry Age: Born on 8/4/1992 Hair color: Brown Eye color: Green Skin color: White, Freckled Tattoos: Oroborus (red, center.. more..

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A Poem by ShaneBerry