What Happens When We Close the Fridge Door?(home)

New poem part of F/A/B/A/P/F hope you all enjoy!!:)

What Happens When We Close the Fridge Door?(home)

So afraid of Every memory slipping away,
So he sits at night and like a movie let's them play!
Running fast or
Running slow
It doesn't matter where he is
If he's not there than he's not home
It's like a daydream he can't catch,
Like going down a winding river on poorly crafted raft,
Without a purpose without a cause,
Held down by all of these laws
Like gravity and practicality.
He feels soo fake,
Wants to return to reality.

It doesn't matter where he is,
If he's not there than he's not home,
Where the heart is don't ya know?
And other things the story goes,
On and on till beginnings get so blurred it hurts,
To strain your eyes to see,
A new beginning one where you are wrapped 'round me.

And I don't feel soo bad no more,
Yeah, I don't feel soo bad no more, no more.
And I can, come home, come home, come home.

Where the heart is don't ya know?
I try to fight this tide alone,
As memory served me long ago,
Once again I pine for home.
A place for me to lay head down,
A place for you to come around.
No more secret meeting places,
No more hour long long drives.
Here I'll answer to all my sins,
Here is where I choose to live. 

And I don't feel soo bad no more,
Yeah, I don't feel soo bad no more, no more.
And I can, come home, come home, come home.

And we can all, come home, come home, come home.

Author's Note

Let me know what y'all think.

Reviews

[Julie Beth]

the flow of this poem is absolutely amazing, it helped suck in the reader. I really liked this poem, it kinda seem like it should be a song, but it's still amazing! Great job :)

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[J. R.]

Excellent flow of words and ideas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The dance of people that sears and stops the reader, well done, good read.

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of two lovers doing what they have to in order to be together yet all he really wants is for her to be able to come to his home where there is comfort. To be able to let the world know of their love.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words and thoughts. I like how you gave life to the poem. Good movement of thoughts and a very nice ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

great!

these would make nice lyrics.