A Poem by Shane Patrick C.

Dark alone suffered and drove
Deja vu with sinister's road
Prisoner Lost 
Convicted in Loss
Reminded this polluted soul

Return the road, blood blistering eyes
scorching hatred, blacken dry skies
Nightmares the reality
Ravage in victory
the righteous bleeds and dies

Shadows cast blankets of shame
doubt and fear accepts blame
controlling pain
pours and rains
Until noting is left but an empty name

© 2011 Shane Patrick C.

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edgar allan poe would be shaking with fear, his position as the best poet ive ever heard of is being trifeled with:3
love your writing, its creepily awesome:3
hey, i have some verry musical friends, and i want to make a music video with these poem lines as lyrics (you'd get full credit of course), wouldn't that be awesome? send me a message we can talk about it

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Added on November 5, 2011
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Shane Patrick C.
Shane Patrick C.


I'm 24. Recovering drug addict. Going to school for music production. I write cause I enjoy it and it helps sometimes. Its more for me than anyone else. But I've been told that I should get my work ou.. more..