Murphy Hacked

Murphy Hacked

A Poem by Shantamurti Paul
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It is a small attempt from me to roughen the Murphy's law up a little.

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The composite complexities

The infinite errands,

The runs turning around,

The forgiving bell,

The unforgettable stops,

And the irresponsibly responsible cries;

Make Murphy laugh…

Leave says Murphy

Leave says the divine

Leave says the king

The pawn marks his presence,

And evolves,

The queen arrives,

And the battle thrives,

Complexities still don’t end,

Murphy rushed to get his ring,

Cyanide it was,

Vulnerableness it was,

What a big fraud he has been.

© 2019 Shantamurti Paul


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Shantamurti Paul
I am just starting writing online, I have plenty of other content, please show some love for my first online post.

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Interesting one but a bit confusing. Good attempt! Keep writing, keep sharing!

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Shantamurti Paul

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for liking it. Yes I agree that it is a bit confusing as I started with describing.. read more
This is a very good piece in terms of the use of concept and word choice. It does however confuse as it sets out as free verse but morphs into rhyming.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Shantamurti Paul

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much as you liked my concept and word choice. Moreover it is my signature style to star.. read more
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Intriguing and interesting.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Shantamurti Paul

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the review.

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Added on April 1, 2019
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Tags: Murphy's law, complexities, cry, cyanide, divine, king, stops

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Shantamurti Paul
Shantamurti Paul

Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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