Waves and the Shore

Casual and regular meeting of the waves with the shore

You are the waves

And I the Shore

 

You come to me

Kiss me

Take a little of me

As you leave

 

You come again,

Kiss me once more,

Take a little more of me

And again you leave

 

Yet,

Neither do you stay with me

Nor have I been washed away

For

You are the waves

And I the shore

And shall remain the same

Evermore

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the metaphor here...some relationships are like that....one or the other comes and goes almost like teasing...
but she understands what it is..and accepts...and is even fine with his leaving...almost like she needs no commitment from him..
"i'll be here when you come back"
nicely done,
j.

[Richard M]

Sharda,
Firstly, nice to meet you and thank you for your friendship. I so love this poem! It's simple and easy to follow. Beautiful in its imagery indeed, with a touch of romanticism.
Take care and stay safe at this time.
Richard

[Gee]

As said by others really good metaphor.
Liked this very much, clever you :)

[Chris Shaw]

Very nicely conveyed. Great use of metaphor here to describe how some relationships turn out. Well done Sharda.

Chris

[Jaffer]

I love this poem for its clever simplicity and a wonderful, complete message. May your writing touch skies.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I love the way you took an element of nature to try and define the nature of certain relationships. So great going Sharda. Keep thinking more such ingenious stuff.

[TV]

Great imagery loved it! T.

[Davidgeo]

That's a really good metaphor for certain types of relationships. And it's just the right length with really good word selection, it all works pretty well here... Very well done.