Acid

Acid

A Poem by Sharkapillar

The only thing worse than a liar

Is a liar whose lies burn like lye

The stench of self-righteousness and political correction

Social class

“What everyone else will think”.

It's all f*****g bullshit.

The acidic feeling of anger in the pit of my stomach

Self-hatred. Refusal to hurt. Denial that they hurt me.

I want to forget I met you. But I depend largely on you.

I can feel the end drawing closer. I never thought we would meet it.

I want to swallow pills and be numb and dizzy. To choke up death and vomit agony.

To bleed out your lies. The scars you left on me.

I hate you. You mean the world to me.

I want to break through a concrete wall with my body alone.

I want to tear you limb from limb and bathe in your blood.

I want you dead so I don't have to miss you alive.

If there's one thing I hate, it's when liars think they can get away with making me feel stupid.

I catch them in the act every time.

And I burn them alive.

© 2012 Sharkapillar


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One insane honest read, I love intensity you shared your poem. You're God gifted talented and if in 16 you can write like this, after few years you will be rocking the world of writers. Keep creating the magic and will return to read more of your work...All the best!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Whoa...some intense thoughts here. I like the honesty here though, and I see real life all over this one.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I can really feel the emotions here. I love the bloodlust!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


This sounds kind of interesting.

It feels a bit poetic with the words you chose.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sharkapillar

5 Years Ago

it's a f*****g poem, I should hope it sounds poetic
Haha yes, that last sentence "And I burn them alive" is just fantastic, really pulled the whole piece together. Great expression of your emotion, I know a lot of people that would kill for your poetic skills.

Posted 6 Years Ago


wow really well done c:

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sharkapillar
Sharkapillar

Red-Light District



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my name is Aoelaigh, I'm 18, and I haven't really used this website since I was younger and I don't really write anymore. All of the writing you'll find on here was from when I was young and desperate.. more..

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