Lone Traveler

For a Friend.

Long upto now, we choosed our ways,

of no difference is to us ,what the other says,

in your heart i lost my home,

you buried me in your past's dome.

as a lone traveler i walk in streets,

since from all sort of company m freed.

but still one thing connects us like thread,

bond that won't break even after we are dead!

flashback of our memories pale,

that we carry with us in life's sail,

but still if you need me any day

as a lone traveler i'll stay.....

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

Good premise but quite a few grammatical errors.

[Vidushi Sharma]

Thank you for your appreciation, but this piece, i had written when i was just fourteen and going through i really hard time.. its real close to my heart! :)

[Michael G. Smith]

I understand, it's okay to rewrite it, isn't it? I am constantly rewriting my poems.

[Vidushi Sharma]

yeah! that is certainly a good idea. i had given up writing for few years in mid, i will definitely rewrite it and post it . :) thank you! :D

[Michael G. Smith]

Awesome, can't wait to see it again.