Lone Traveler

Lone Traveler

A Poem by Vidushi Sharma
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For a Friend.

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Long upto now, we choosed our ways,
of no difference is to us ,what the other says,
in your heart i lost my home,
you buried me in your past's dome.
as a lone traveler i walk in streets,
since from all sort of company m freed.
but still one thing connects us like thread,
bond that won't break even after we are dead!
flashback of our memories pale,
that we carry with us in life's sail,
but still if you need me any day
as a lone traveler i'll stay.....

© 2013 Vidushi Sharma


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Good premise but quite a few grammatical errors.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael G. Smith

8 Years Ago

I understand, it's okay to rewrite it, isn't it? I am constantly rewriting my poems.
Vidushi Sharma

8 Years Ago

yeah! that is certainly a good idea. i had given up writing for few years in mid, i will definitely .. read more
Michael G. Smith

8 Years Ago

Awesome, can't wait to see it again.

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Added on September 19, 2013
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Tags: Friends, bond, lone

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Vidushi Sharma
Vidushi Sharma

Jaipur, India



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I wanted to be a writer but was held back by some forces. Here i am, giving all wings to my dreams, fantasies and thoughts. more..

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