Canvas

Canvas

A Poem by W0lf-tale
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Never done a poem before so I thought I'd try. "The canvas red and black She can paint a lovely picture But"

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Canvas

She holds her brush against the canvas
And starts to draw
Here there, everywhere
Until her wrists are raw
Looking at it as she falls back
Dropping the brush
The canvas red and black
She can paint a lovely picture
But
The story has a twist
Her paintbrush is a razor
And her canvas is her wrist

© 2012 W0lf-tale


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Very good. I love the dark twist and the ryme and rhythm. :3

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Wow, you definitely put a twist on this. It was good and especially for your first poem. I have a poem about cutting as well, i know a few people who are affected by it. :(

Posted 9 Years Ago


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9 Years Ago

Thank you! Means a lot :) I'll check your poem out! And it really does affect people. I get really e.. read more
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Added on September 6, 2012
Last Updated on September 9, 2012
Tags: painting, canvas, sad, dark

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W0lf-tale
W0lf-tale

Essex, United Kingdom



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