You

You

A Poem by sheila.j

This fall is just oh so confusing

Like a roller coaster

Screaming and terrified

Yet excited and alive

This is something I would

Wait in line for over and over

Just to get back on

It's an addiction to the thrill

To the feeling of words

Stuck hot in my throat

The way everything is so clear

But bluring at the same time

Not knowing where I am

Or the where I've been

Only moving forward

Never looking back

A place reality stops

And anything goes

Somewhere I can live

Without a worry in the world

A whole new galaxy of possibilities

But only choosing one

This feeling of freedom

Of elation and contentment

It is you

and you have me falling hard.

 

 

 

 

© 2013 sheila.j


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I totally get you on this, totally. What an amazing place it is to be on the edge of creation where you realize you can do anything, you can imagine anything.

A place reality stops
And anything goes
Somewhere I can live
Without a worry in the world

What this spoke to me was, the falling in love with creation itself.
Wow thank you for writing this, the having the freedom of choosing the possibility out of the many to make the creation come to life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


sheila.j

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! :)
i love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sheila.j

11 Years Ago

:) thats goooood
Life is just that, a roller coaster. And often times the highs we experience are love and happiness, and the lows are are our weak moments. And depending on what you believe in you get one ride on the coaster or several. Apropos allegory, kudos.

Posted 11 Years Ago


sheila.j

11 Years Ago

Thanks!
This reminded me of something Avril L. would sing, and i really liked it! This a punk pop rock feel to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


sheila.j

11 Years Ago

Thank you!!
I hope the metaphor for roller coaster doesn't mean that you are in for a ride that has incredible lows as much as it does... highs!! You are fun to read when you are excited!! : ) It didn't know what "bluring" meant, but that's O.K.. xoxo -Mark

Posted 11 Years Ago


sheila.j

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :) What I meant by roller coaster was you're scared of it but you want to do it over and .. read more
Patrick Henry

11 Years Ago

I'm rooting for you when I read you, so I guess when I read that you are taking these "leaps of fait.. read more

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Added on January 1, 2013
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Tags: falling, happy, content, someone, feeling, great, love

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sheila.j
sheila.j

Boulder, CO



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