Broken without you

Do they see you?
Do they see me?
Why do we care?
We aren't kids anymore.

I can fake that smile they need.
I can give you my all.
I can be everything you need.

I break, I fall
When you aren't around.
You can give your love.
They try to make you take it away.
Just please stay.
I am broken without your love.

We aren't "too young".
Why do we care what the critics have to say?
We can't let them destroy our feelings.
Young is different for every person.
I am broken without our love.

Just please stay.
Stay the way you have for these past two years.
I love you.

Author's Note

I am in love with this guy named Deven Luke. I love him without any consideration of what others think about it. I have been told pointless times that we are to young and that I should graduate college before we marry but I can't spend a day away. He is my rock and I am his, we are in love. Stop telling us we aren't old enough.

Reviews

[Duckey]

I love this, it is so well written and it flows wonderfully. It is a very emotional poem and i really enjoyed reading this, well done :)