Fate

Fate

A Poem by Shae
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Just thoughts .

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From the second she met him there was a bolting feeling of passion within her,
It was as if his handshake was absorbing the very love from her heart,
It was fireworks and franks,
It was Easter and Christmas ,
It was fate.

© 2015 Shae


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simple and direct. efficient

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing use of words. Create meeting and create the need in short verse. I like the flow of thoughts to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shae

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words and review :-) !
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Nicely done short verse. I like your fireworks and franks.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shae

8 Years Ago

:-) Thank you very much !

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