Unknown

Talk...

Before I fly through the silver sky.

 

Tell Me...

Because I am here now.

 

Try...

If I'm already gone, to

 

Follow...

Because I need you to be there

 

If you follow...

You'll meet the Unknown, a land of

 

Love...

And hope you've never found before...

 

Silver Winds...

And Silver Skys, Gold Roads, And Open Eyes.

 

Talk, Listen, Try to find Me

Somewhere in Lands that are Unknown.

Reviews

[sherra.]

Wow. 11 months is a long time. And I really like my poem. Haha (:

[MAC]

Thank you for entering my contest. This is an amazing poem. I wanted you to know that your poem was in the top seven. I have done many contests and this one was by far the hardest to judge because of the amount of talent here at the cafe. Again thank you for entering this amazing work.

[Dark Daughters]

I loved the imagery and the flow of the poem and then how everything came together in the end, excellent job!

[The Autumn Faerie]

Ah, yes.
The lands of the unknown...
Such a wondrous place to visit...