lies on fire

you is, i are, we am-

together: all apart.

emotions running wild-

hate, love: heart.

polite you am-

i are quaint.

parade of colors-

strokes, lies: paint.

speaking fake words-

truth, false: deceit.

eyes of fire-

walk, dance: meet.

lids shut, closed-

see, blind: light.

sky raging blue-

hate, love: fight.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kelley]

I like what you did with this Sherie! Useing simple words you made a great poem.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[sherie carter]

thank you so much!
probably cause they don't understand it. haha.

[Kristin Brecoe]

wow. why hasn't anyone else commented on this. its wonderful!