Sublime

Sublime

A Poem by Joyrider
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About the love and the emotion that is pure and divine

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I love loneliness, when I am with you,

I love darkness, when I look your eyes,

I own the sadness, when I see it in you,

I own the madness, when it’s in your mind

 

All I need to know, is you are all mine,

All you need to know, is our love is divine,

All we need to show, together we are fine,

Always we can show, together we shine.

 

Let us leave our past, in past, let it subside,

Let us seal our heart, with each other inside,

Let us open our minds, with nothing to hide,

Let God's sublime light, lead us in love's side.

© 2013 Joyrider


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Aww, that was really sweet and beautiful. I thought that last paragraph was the most beautiful of all, and it summed it up so well.

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Nice flow.. I liked it...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Beautifully done...wonderful piece :) x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful, touching and sincere piece! I loved every line and every word of this lovely poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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wow absolutely amazing! i really liked your use of rhyme and everything about the poem was just WOW. fantastic job :) really enjoyed, and felt the love :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Ahhhh....breathtakingly beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love it! It it so beautiful.

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Awesome...:)...........................

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Joyrider
Joyrider

cochin, kerala, India



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