Sublime

About the love and the emotion that is pure and divine

I love loneliness, when I am with you,

I love darkness, when I look your eyes,

I own the sadness, when I see it in you,

I own the madness, when it’s in your mind

 

All I need to know, is you are all mine,

All you need to know, is our love is divine,

All we need to show, together we are fine,

Always we can show, together we shine.

 

Let us leave our past, in past, let it subside,

Let us seal our heart, with each other inside,

Let us open our minds, with nothing to hide,

Let God's sublime light, lead us in love's side.

Reviews

[Archia]

Aww, that was really sweet and beautiful. I thought that last paragraph was the most beautiful of all, and it summed it up so well.

[smilempsn]

Nice flow.. I liked it...

[NA]

Beautifully done...wonderful piece :) x

[dianalondon]

What a beautiful, touching and sincere piece! I loved every line and every word of this lovely poem!

[Katho28]

wow absolutely amazing! i really liked your use of rhyme and everything about the poem was just WOW. fantastic job :) really enjoyed, and felt the love :)

[Lisa Victoria]

Ahhhh....breathtakingly beautiful!

[Kelly]

I love it! It it so beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

Awesome...:)...........................