Mr.Psycho

Mr.Psycho

A Poem by Joyrider
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A poem written to vent the anger, as its not possible to do so in the real world. its with a comical sense, Hope it will bring a smile on the reader's face.

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Mr. Psycho

dragon, it's your tail that's on fire
we wait for the day you retire
bygone, they don't care for your dire
so see its your post they desire

you're the monkey on my back
and you think i am just a slack
you are the biggest techno-crack
i want to kick you on your back

You're the menacing mean Psycho
And you did not want to let me go
Are you the  freaking fan of Nero? 
Breathes in fire, as you hear 'hello'.

frown up your brows to the most
crown down your mind for the toast
are you defected by some ghost
Moron, why don't just get lost

© 2013 Joyrider


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Joyrider
any kind of review is accepted. tips to improve are also welcomed.

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Well structured.
The repeated rhymes are like punches! Good job it is poetry!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is great, it reads like an angry pop-song. "Techno-crack," good word.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ha ha ha
fun to read
written in anger right?

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyrider

7 Years Ago

Yes, it is written in anger. To be honest, the dragon in the poem is not me, its a guy who is very s.. read more
Laminators Dubai

7 Years Ago

oooh
got it well that not new, so many people out there, wasting their anergy just like that.... read more
The most important part is that its very good fun to read

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting write, the rhyming was good :) i didnt mind it its different well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great rhyming in this one! I liked the metaphor of the dragon and the fire being anger. Good venting. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good piece, truly enjoyed I like the entire idea of the dragon to get your anger out. good job. keep writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice one, i really like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I like how you use some humor to get the message across of describe a state you are going through by using great imagery...Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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great vent, enjoyed...very much :) x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 30, 2013
Last Updated on July 30, 2013
Tags: comedy, anger

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Joyrider
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cochin, kerala, India



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