In Love

In Love

A Poem by Joyrider
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When we are in love, the only thing we can do is constantly think about the lover. This is dedicated to my love, for make me feel this.

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as i sink in to the sleep,
from the deep, love rise above.
as i rise back from the sleep, 
from the dream, you still glow.
every time my mind try,
fill you in every thought.
every time when i think,
in a feeling i am caught.
i want to get next to you,
it is all i want to do.
every time i see you,
time flies, oh! what to do.
from past, my heart was numb,
and then, you melted it slow,
and filled with tender love,
made it fly like a dove.
i shine in your afterglow......

© 2016 Joyrider


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Sweet poem on love. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is wonderfully sweet.As they say love is a many splendoured thing.:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful to make you fly like a dove and shine in the after glow. Lovely tribute to your wife. Your english is not always correct, but I think that adds to your poetry. I think you could work on metre a bit to help make the poem 'move' and 'flow' The subject is discretely handled and , yes, I liked the poem very much.

Posted 6 Years Ago


A very sweet poem . Love really is a beautiful and breath taking thing

Posted 7 Years Ago


Yes, love is quite amazing, isn't it! The extra line in the last verse really helps it to make an impact!
Nice little poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a glowing tribute to your beloved wife. A very romantic poem...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Lovely heartfelt sentiments to be sure. And yes, many people are like this. Their hearts have grown icy cold - encumbered and outnumbered by the countless times both their affections and spirit have been broken in false promises and shattered in their unfulfilled dreams.

It takes a kind, gentle, and patient person to melt the frost from it. And then it might shine once more to join the radiance of the one whom freed it.

That is what I read from your poem, Shiggy. :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


I love this poem. I can almost feel the love for your wife. Very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow my friend.. this one is a treat to your wife from a remarkably expressed here - shiggy.
I've written many poem's dedicating them to my wife, she hardly care's about poetries now. She want me to express her live and not on WC or Facebook Lol.. Keep my story apart.. this is simply romantic love saga and I bless you both with love and understanding with care and support to each other :)
Stay blessed :)
- Singh :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a beautiful poem...I hope you shared it with your wife:) Love like this is very rare these days and this is the perfect reminder of those truly deep feelings of Love...wonderful write:)

Lisa

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joyrider

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lisa, my wife read you review and she was more happy :)
Lisa Victoria

7 Years Ago

That's wonderful! I wish you both all the happiness in the world:)

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Added on August 15, 2013
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cochin, kerala, India



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