That damned heart

That damned heart

A Poem by Shivi

So he kicked you in your guts,
And you cannot breathe,
Cannot eat,
Cannot move,
It hurts so bad,
You were up all night,
You couldn't cry,
Shame on you!

For falling hard,
And deep in love,
With that cheat,
Who broke your heart,
In a moment of heat,

Now you sit here,
With those broken peices,
Who do you hold responsible,
For all this mess,
Well, definitely not him,
For you had a chance,
To sheild yourself,
From this misery,

You knew it all along,
About the hurt,
Love always brings,
With your arms wide open,
You knocked at his heart,
And when it shut you out,

You fell down so hard,
Now you can't even get up,
Can't move a toe,

So lie on that damn floor,
And ponder over what's lost,
Over that thing,
That enemy within you,
The cause of all troubles,
That damned heart! - Shivi.

© 2012 Shivi


Author's Note

Shivi
Honest opinions and criticism too very much welcomed :)

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Thanks Steven! I actually didn't think.. I just let my words control me and let them out. I think pain in my heart did the rest of the part :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like how much of a story you painted in so few lines. I'm actually wondering how you did that--I have to look back.. And the write itself felt pure in expression.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Shivi
Shivi

Bangalore, India



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Passionate, fun, crazy, action-oriented person. Like to write poetry. I must say I am an impulsive writer actually. Spritually inclined, learn to practice Reiki. Anything that's connected to the natur.. more..

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