All of this

All of this

A Poem by shivohumsohum
"

Sky, eye, die, lie, do, gold, dust, trust...

"

What would you think of trust if everything you have ever been told was a lie?

What if you realized in the pursuit of excellence, there was no 'do-or-die?'

What if Gold was devalued to ordinary brown dust under your own mortal eye?

What would you say when you found out for yourself...  that illusion in the Sky?

 

Sky, eye, die, lie, do, gold, dust, trust...

 

All of this and more would come true...

If I ever lost my faith in you!


                                     

© 2013 shivohumsohum


Author's Note

shivohumsohum
Lost without you in my own wilderness

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The cataclysmic reactions between the spiritual and the mundane. And yet man has already greatly shunned the spiritual aspects of life - sadly. In everything there is consequence. This poem has heat, passion, vision and introspection. Great range of emotions and prompts for mindfulness in everything from love to religion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shivohumsohum

11 Years Ago

Thank you child Lee for being there for me
i hear you now and i heard you well
beacuse y.. read more



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The cataclysmic reactions between the spiritual and the mundane. And yet man has already greatly shunned the spiritual aspects of life - sadly. In everything there is consequence. This poem has heat, passion, vision and introspection. Great range of emotions and prompts for mindfulness in everything from love to religion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shivohumsohum

11 Years Ago

Thank you child Lee for being there for me
i hear you now and i heard you well
beacuse y.. read more
spiritual..reminds me of sufism in some of the phrasing...
love does many a wonderful thing

Posted 11 Years Ago


shivohumsohum

11 Years Ago

:)
thx for ur understanding
Your writing is so Good. Well Done! Keep Writing Friend!

Do u read mine 2 "Why?, Who is a Poet, Time and Anguish "

If possible then give your reviews..

Regards,
Lucky

Posted 11 Years Ago


shivohumsohum

11 Years Ago

ok and thanku
Gobinder Singh Dhindsa

11 Years Ago

Welcome
I do truly like this one. Wonderful wording and sentiment.
-sigh-
You people are killing me with all this Romance!

Just beautiful
-keeps it-

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rogue

11 Years Ago

That was actually very sweet and I thank you. :)
shivohumsohum

11 Years Ago

you are getting to know me :) i aint that bad
Rogue

11 Years Ago

-wags a finger at you-

Now, now, they'll be no tempting to the Dark Side. :D
A very beautiful poem with great questions. You are a creative mind...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Freedom will rock you and love will rock you...:)
Rogue

11 Years Ago

I think Queen hit The Wall on that one.

-grin-
shivohumsohum

11 Years Ago

Goldylocks its time for tea,
pour some sugar on me,
amazing, amazed, greenday be praised.. read more

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shivohumsohum

Shambala, Mount Kailash, India



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Everything started with me. Everything lives with me and within me. Everything will end with me. Shivohum Sohum please add me if you will at www.facebook.com/shivohum.sohum more..

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