All of this

What would you think of trust if everything you have ever been told was a lie?

What if you realized in the pursuit of excellence, there was no 'do-or-die?'

What if Gold was devalued to ordinary brown dust under your own mortal eye?

What would you say when you found out for yourself...  that illusion in the Sky?

 

Sky, eye, die, lie, do, gold, dust, trust...

 

All of this and more would come true...

If I ever lost my faith in you!

                                     

Author's Note

Lost without you in my own wilderness

Reviews

[Kristin Lee]

The cataclysmic reactions between the spiritual and the mundane. And yet man has already greatly shunned the spiritual aspects of life - sadly. In everything there is consequence. This poem has heat, passion, vision and introspection. Great range of emotions and prompts for mindfulness in everything from love to religion.

[shivohumsohum]

Thank you child Lee for being there for me
i hear you now and i heard you well
beacuse your heart has joy only i can tell
bless you child for yyour reverie
that in which you revere me
always yours-S.S

[Wondering Mind]

spiritual..reminds me of sufism in some of the phrasing...
love does many a wonderful thing

[shivohumsohum]

:)
thx for ur understanding

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Your writing is so Good. Well Done! Keep Writing Friend!

Do u read mine 2 "Why?, Who is a Poet, Time and Anguish "

If possible then give your reviews..

Regards,
Lucky

[shivohumsohum]

ok and thanku

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Welcome

[Rogue]

I do truly like this one. Wonderful wording and sentiment.
-sigh-
You people are killing me with all this Romance!

Just beautiful
-keeps it-

[shivohumsohum]

You are blessed with an eye for grace
you are graced with blessings
you are eyed by the poetry forum for your beauty too

[Rogue]

That was actually very sweet and I thank you. :)

[shivohumsohum]

you are getting to know me :) i aint that bad

[Rogue]

-wags a finger at you-

Now, now, they'll be no tempting to the Dark Side. :D

[Sami Khalil]

A very beautiful poem with great questions. You are a creative mind...:)

[shivohumsohum]

Thank you Sami
I am not beautiful but my consort is the epitome of it:)

[Sami Khalil]

If you say so I believe you...My pleasure...:)

[shivohumsohum]

yes...you see her in the glisten of morning dew..
you smell her in the spring air when you are feeling new..
you hate her when she gives you bitter medicine for blue-glue-flu

[Sami Khalil]

True and true and all coffee is a great brew...:)

[Rogue]

blue-glue-flu?
I take Doctor Seuss wife for $100, Alex

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...He is so crazy but I like him...LOl

[shivohumsohum]

last christmas when she gave you her heart
but the very next year you broke it apart sami
read more last christmas when she gave you her heart
but the very next year you broke it apart sami
along with your cofy mug

[shivohumsohum]

Alexander the great gave up when he conqured your world

[Sami Khalil]

I kept it in a water jug to drink the blues and water what I dug...:)

[shivohumsohum]

100$
i give medical advice for free
Rogue i just say...be ok

[Rogue]

Hahahahaha
You two are a riot! :P

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[shivohumsohum]

no more riots...
we dont want no education..
i want to break free..
wwe willl freewill rock you

[Sami Khalil]

Freedom will rock you and love will rock you...:)

[Rogue]

I think Queen hit The Wall on that one.

-grin-

[shivohumsohum]

Goldylocks its time for tea,
pour some sugar on me,
amazing, amazed, greenday be praised,
I wont let the sun go down on me,
Let it be.