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What does your life mean? Is your self worth in material things?

It's not about the diamonds on your necklace.

When times get hard will you act reckless?

It's not about your name brand shoes.

So many choices, which one will you choose?

All you care about is your new dress.

Spiritual enclinement is when you're at your best.

Get your mind off those eighty dollar jeans.

Be protected by God's love by all means.

Don't just be happy when you've got money.

Life's shocking without the milk and honey.

You're depressed because you don't have enough for the retail.

God's love is free, he has nothing on sale.

Reviews

[Lyrical Love]

WONDERFUL SENTIMENT! I FOUND THIS PIECE SPIRITUALLY ENTICING!
GREAT WRITE!!

[charlotte talley]

I agree with Anima Inspired. yes this is a beautiful poem and to me well written. and you have captured or told the truth about how people do get caught up in the luxuries of life. we need to focus on more of GOD,and not our selves. GO GIRL you got it.

[Anima Inspired]

Great sentiment...there are too many people who are simply caught up in the "luxuries" of the world that we live in today, where everything is so "easy" to get...but these "easy" things aren't the things that matter, rather it is our innerselves and our spirituality that is what will truly carry us through our lives. You've done a great job at "showing" us what you want us to see; great imagery.

Structurally, this was pretty good...the rhyme scheme is nice, as you've used a lot of rhyme's that are quite original. A couple of the lines did seem a little forced, particularly lines 6 and 11, but overall, this was quite nicely done.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

This is so beautiful!
I'm a man that treasures his relationship with God, and reading these captivating words you've written put a smile on my face and they felt like a cool breeze upon my spirit!

Bravo!

-Marvin Lewis

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

This is so beautiful!
I'm a man that treasures his relationship with God and reading these captivating words you've written put a smile on my face and felt like a cool breeze upon my spirit!

Bravo!

-Marvin Lewis