Feelings

Feelings

I have no clue what my feelings are towards you.

Maybe I hate you, maybe I want you to disappear, maybe I secretly want you next to me.

But I can't like you like that, for you are my teacher.

I can get you into trouble, or worse get you put in jail.

Everyday i'm excited for school just to see you, no one else.

No one knows about our relationship, but they can't know anyway.

During school we don't even dare to look at each other.

For we know that if we look, we will give eachother away.

Should I let you go? Or should I keep you 'till i'm 18?

Either way i'm going to keep you forever and ever.

Never letting go.

People think that it is just a teenagers crush, but really, it's love.

No one my age knows what love means, no one.

Love is the way the mountians have a white blanket named snow covering them.

The mountians LOVE snow because it's what keeps the mountians warm, the white, fluffy blanket.

Thats how I love you!

Like your my live blanket.

You make me feel better when things go wrong, you always are giving me advice.

The only thing that I can't stand about you is that you are always keeping my mind up 'till 1:00 in the morning. I can't get you out of my mind.

I love you!

Those 3 simple words, but mean so much to the both of us.

Do you love me?

Reviews

[BikerAngie]

Wonderfully expressed my dear young lady! I truly wish people would try to remember back to their youth love is so raw at our age and every bit as intense as that of a more seasoned person. I hate the term puppy love it is so demeaning. Validate your feelings on paper is fine keep up the good work. but try to hear me when I say keep it on paper I know the feelings are real but take it from someone who grew up way to fast. take your time and if you feel love take it slow real slow because once it has happened and ended the pain is almost unbearable until the next time. and when the right one finally truly comes a long the one you are truly meant to be with if you think past loves were intense just hag on cause you are now ready for the ride of a life time.

[AK]

Beautiful poem! I really liked the way you expressed your feelings and emotions. The last line was wonderful. Great write!

[Wolfwind]

I must say... You have expressed snow in such a way that actually brings across warmth. For one such as I to feel warmth with the very mention of the white stuff, you indeed have talent as a poet! Kudos!

As to the overall piece, it captures the thoughts and emotions of the moment. It shows the roller coaster of inner dialog that would come with such an event and it is presented clearly.

My thoughts... crushes come, crushes go, time will tell, time may show, but in the end, and around the bend, it's only fate that can truly know.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Kayla]

LOVE this poem! I think everyone at some point has been in this situation! Great job!

[jennifer little]

wonderful well done on this poem to i loved it great job keep up the good work

[Gomer LePoet]

Whoa! I'm hoping this is just a fantasy, but I fear not. This is a time bomb waiting to explode!! I hope someone comes to their senses and sees the potential and real danger here. I know love is a hard thing to fight but, just sayin'.

[Arthur Henn]

The crush of love for a teacher... Beautiful written poem PJ

You are very young... Never let go of these words you have written... in another thirty years or less, you will look back and just smile, and, smile...

Art

[PJ]

This was from my crush in JH before my HOT teacher moved away.i wish he would move back....huh