A Challenge

A Challenge

A Poem by Laoidhigh Uilleag

The sun will rest with the stars,

the moon will hide it's face,

and this darkness is called new.

Alas, they speak truth,

for i never had to face this.

Swimming a mile to survive,

thats a challenge.

Crossing the atlantic,

Well, thats a feat.

We see a seperation ahead,

and we accept a loss against this feat.

Yet, it's only a challenge.

The ability to complete it,

happens to be low.

Push yourself hard enough,

Make yourself strong enough,

Become wise enough,

and you may overcome it.

© 2009 Laoidhigh Uilleag


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I really liked this, especially the end- that we can overcome anything when we set our mind to it. Very thought provoking! Good job!

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Added on June 21, 2009

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Laoidhigh Uilleag
Laoidhigh Uilleag

Saint Louis, MO



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I, Laoidhigh Uilleag, or "poetic playful heart", am a complete romantacist and wants way too many somewhat unattainable things. Though he tries, he is a confused lad, and..has it going hard in his li.. more..

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