Stars

Stars

A Poem by Shuchita

Under the starry night,
we sat,
with blankets on,
to shield us from the cold wind.
Counting the stars,
Intertwining our hands,
Looking at each other
or perhaps,
Just giving a sweet glance.

© 2016 Shuchita


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Sweetly romantic. This is the description of a perfect night

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you!!
Aww, that's sweet. :D Wish I had that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

:D Thank you for your review
a beautiful read and lovely sentiment to the events. Thanks for posting

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading ^_^
I love the imagery. The kind of night I like (though it's only me, not "we"). Simple and sweet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
Aprille

3 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
Ain't love wonderful. A nice picture painted in words.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Very sweet and your words invoke such vivid imagery

I thoroughly enjoyed this :]

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Beautiful imagery. It is short, crisp and well worded.
sitting in silence with our beloved under the stars is truly an experience suited for dreams.
Lovely write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Awwwwww!!!!!!!!! I LOVE ITTTTTTT!!!!!!! Knew I'd get thru to you....

Posted 3 Years Ago


seems like you have sweet thoughts, write more!

Posted 3 Years Ago



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