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Comfortable Lies

Comfortable Lies

A Poem by Shuchita

You comforted me with your lies,
You took me in your arms like nobody did,
But soon I realised,
It was only to rip me apart

© 2017 Shuchita


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Short and to the point! Nice job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Shuchita

1 Year Ago

thank you! :)
Feeling sad for you bro .....

Posted 2 Years Ago


All are for short tyms... Dnt run behind them

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

i totally agree :)
Short. Yet to the point. A great piece. Short and sweet.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you!
Honest and direct words. I did like them. Love and greed. Bad place to know. Thank you dear friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you for your review
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I hope a lesson was learned. Love can be the most wonderful thing. It can also be the most hurtful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

true indeed! thank you
Most people fall into that trap, at that time it feels good but at the end its bad, its better to tell the truth from the word go

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thanks ^_^
Not all blankets are warm!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

yes! thank you! :)
I can't relate to this one lol. But nice words used. Other people could surely relate specially with a broken heart. ;)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thank you for reading and reviewing
This poem encompasses my current stage in life right now! well done


Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you! :D

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