My Dad's Definition

My Dad's Definition

A Poem by Jude-Cipher
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“In the darkest days, when I feel inadequate, unloved and unworthy, I remember whose daughter I am and I straighten my crown.” – Unknown

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My Dad's Definition



It’s you who always gave me the reason

The reason to go with my way on

The man who was always been my weapon

When nobody dares to lean on

You always have this  big word

To create my big world

Your silver  is not what I wanted

But it’s your love that will never be take for granted

You’re a good teacher

When the world became tough teaser

You’re my carrier

When world give me so much burden

You’d been my Simon,

Helping me carry my cross to keep going on

You’d been my Shakespeare

Who gives symphonies on my fears

You loved me whatever I am

Molding  me to be a good one

I love you of what you are

And you’ll always be my man

Whatever life may takes

I’ll always be in you

I will always love you

My Dad,my love,and my brand new!

© 2019 Jude-Cipher


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Great poem! I have just a couple tips. Firstly, I'd recommend changing it from "will never be take for granted" to "will never be taken for granted". Secondly, changing "When the world became tough teaser" to "When the world became a tough teaser". Finally, removing the extra space from between silver and is and between Molding and me, and adding a space after the commas after Dad and love in the last line. Overall a very beautiful work!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


What a lovely tribute to your DAd

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jude-Cipher

5 Years Ago

Yeah I hope so.Thanks!

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Jude-Cipher
Jude-Cipher

Philippines



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Currently studying with Certificate in Computer Technology as my course.Born on August 2000 in Samar,Philippines.I love writing so much and I believe it is my voice and my feelings. more..

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