Beautiful

Dedicated to Pratibha*

What is more beautiful? Your face or your soul?

What is more precious? You or your true friendship?

What is more real? Your ignorance or your care for me

What is more beautiful? Your smile or your sadness?

What is more true? Your words or your eyes?

What is more annoying? Your talking or your silence?

What is more intense? your scowl or my attempt to convince you?

sh va

Author's Note

She is my good friend. I don't know why she is mad at me. But, I'm trying to convince her in my own way. Someone had said me that I ain't afford to lose a good friend like her. She is not talking to me and I didn't find any scope of betterment. But still I would like to say that. Pratibha, you are really a good friend of mine and I'm missing a friend.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow, you are truly a great friend. If you show this to her, her reason of being mad at you will go away.

[Deepak Belbase]

no friend! there are some wounds that words can't heal...

[Najam Us Saher]

True......

[¿]

Distance - the enhancement of friendship I guess!
This one may also become more vibrant.....
Great read😊

[Deepak Belbase]

thanks for your insightful review. yeah I guess it could me more vibrant but i decide to keep it raw and simple

[¿]

No no...maybe my lines got mistake...I wanted to say the distance will enhance and make the relationship more vibrant!
Besides twas good read...you're welcome☺

[Akki]

I can understand your feelings my friend because I'm also going into the same love game. I hope that you will be successful in convincing her.
I will suggest you don't waste your time to convince her. Because, it's a time you focused on your career. Remember, you owe to your parents, or love ones.
Some friends are came into life to only help you in the halfway of goal. I know it's difficult to forget or moved on but, It's necessary. I hope you understand. I don't want to hurt your feelings but, I know what the end result will be. Respect her feelings and Moved on. She will be happy to see you like that and not like this.

[Deepak Belbase]

first of all it's not the intimacy or love. Another thing I'm not doing this because i have any emotional attachment or anything else but because it's nobal thing to do. by doing this I'm also helping myself to win over my ego problem. Man! don't worry! I'm not emotional. I'm just playing my part. I don't care what will happen? It's all up to her own call. if she feels like it's good she'll comeback otherwise she'll move forward. My career is different thing it's part of my professional life and whatever happening between me and my friends! it's personal. And I never mix my personal life with my professional life.

And I appreciate your concern

[Riddhi]

It have been a long time since i read your writing...I hope that you will be successful in convincing your friend..Your friend is really luck to have a friend like you..I really hope that she talks to you..Coming to this poem , it was a small , simple and sweet poem...I indeed liked it..And it was cute!!!I felt that everything came straight from your heart and your soul..
Keep on writing...
Riddhi

[Deepak Belbase]

Thanks for your review! I Maybe one day she'll realise that escaping is not solution of any problem.

[Riddhi]

I hope that she understands that...

[Zoya]

Ah, yes. Convincing can be hard, but don't give in. It's gonna be worth it!
A cute, little piece.

[Deepak Belbase]

convincing is very hard man! she is still mad at me and i really don't know why?

[Zoya]

Has to be a reason :)