THAT GIRL!!!!!

This was a birthday gift for my classmate and friend Shravya! Couldn't complete it but here's nothing....

Drunk on confusion,

I don't know where to start

For I find no words

to explain the dwellings of my heart.

 

I tread along the journey,

for somewhere the road should initiate

It marks the glories of a girl

whose thoughts did wonders to create

Pardon me, for I don’t intend to humiliate

 

In boring class,

Apart we sat,

There was an unfathomable depth in your eyes,

I couldn't percept.

 

With quiet lips

And chaos in the mind

She pens the most overwhelming words

 

that one couldn't have entwined.

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. Create place and thoughts of a another described in your words. I like the joy in thoughts and feel of wishes in the words. I enjoyed the poetry.
Coyote

[Shweta Shah]

Thank you so much for the time you spent on reading and reviewing my works!
I really appreciate it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure. I enjoyed your poetry and you are welcome.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!
so much love and longings........
beautifully rhymed......
i loved it........you should write more of this......very heartfelt
:)

[Shweta Shah]

thnks alot!