Valley of Dreams

Valley of Dreams

A Poem by Sid

I walk down the valley
Set deep within my dreams
The lush green fields
The dancing daffodils
I gaze up at the azure sky
Serene in its embrace
When I see you
My angel from that sky
I move closer to you
Enveloped in your warmth
And I hold out my hand
Just to touch you
A fire inside me burns
A longing just to hold you
And drift away
One with the clouds
I remember the days
When you were mine
That warm embrace
And the gentle touch
I gaze in your eyes now
And tears, they flow
I hold your hands
And ask you why
“Why did you leave me?
In this world alone
To the Lord you went
Your warmth I need”
“Hold me close
In your loving memories
Love me forever and
I will live in you”
You say these words
And smile at me
I embrace you tight
To never let you go
I watch alone in reverie
As you fade away
Till I meet you again
In my valley of dreams.

© 2012 Sid


Author's Note

Sid
This is my first attempt at a love related poem and frankly I'm really doubtful about how it's turned out, so tell me what you think!

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😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 Sorry, but I ain't joking.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is you first attempt at this?? And this is so awesome already! You wrote it so definite like you experienced it.
Infact, i was wondering but then saw the authors note. Loved it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful enjoyed the read

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
I believe it turned out good! Sometimes your style with the rhyming trips me up, but I take the time to reread and am always pleased when I take it in. Nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the read and review!
It's so melodic, made me smile. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
I loved reading it. I love the romance, the sweetness, the imagery and the idea. It's truly beautiful! Amazing piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!
Beautiful write full of hope for love.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!
this one is very good for a first try, i didn't try to write in that feild either, don't know if i will, but anyways the sadness it holds made me think alot of things. good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!
I would've thought it was love related even if you hadn't told me it was! You'd did an amazing job with it, don't doubt yourself! You did an good job for your first try (better than me...I haven't even written a love related poem XD i need to try that...)
It was beautiful and well written. It just sings love! ;) Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!
A sad but yet a hopeful piece. Nicely written,
Thanx for your review as well

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thanks for your review too!!

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