looming dream

looming dream

A Poem by siddarth

You hide behind your feelings
and keep the truth locked away,
but there is so much said
in the things you don’t say

You innocently, tell me
our time has come and gone
and that we can’t go back
but I don’t believe it
and this time you’re wrong


The distance you put between us
is nothing more than time lost;
a place for your feelings to hide,
yet I can hear the love in your voice
each time we talk


My patience has no end
when it comes to loving you
and I will wait a lifetime
for you to see the truth


Real love doesn’t go away
it doesn’t fade into the past,
it goes on forever
and always finds its way back


I will wait a lifetime for you
because you are my soul,
and behind all of your doubt


I know you can’t let go

You are my soul,
and I am yours, too.
If two people were ever meant to be,
it’s me and you.

© 2013 siddarth


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The ending of the write's very strong ... it's reflecting a mirror of true lovers whose love's immortal. I loved the words you used to expressing the feelings of your heart about your love. Nice flow of ink.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like those looming dreams and sweet poetry like this one...:)..................

Posted 7 Years Ago


This piece is a perfect presentation of a faithful love. I admire the speakers optimism that he's still the one in her heart even if he has to wait a lifetime.

Profound piece. Keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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