Discombobulated

its about the confusion faced by today's mankind due to the malice happening around.

Son you gotta bow down to fly high,

Life's meaning has never changed ever since it was made.

look at the mirror is it just you?

you're in the time when your shadows trait when you've reached those highest gates.

now you know,that when you do fall...

you would be left alone to crawl..

because the gates of mercy are closed...

right in your eyes.

And now you look back to find just another way,

though you know that its so far away.

The keys of eternity are lost in the sands of time,

your lost in tranquility,seeking immortality.

your're never gonna give in,

but your soul wants to break free

now you know,your judgements,

your hopes...

your plans...

would be gone.

a new life awaits...

no more dreams at stake.

now you know,that when you do fall...

you would be left alone to crawl..

because the gates of mercy would be closed...

right in your eyes.

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good words..!!!

[sid......]

thanx a lot.previously started to fight depression.now dis has become my hobby.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very well written, This poem was strong all the way through!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

love the title, lol. and the whole poem was awesome! you really do have a way with words that totally draws the reader in!