Divine Complement

Beloved soul,

You're loved forever,

By me...

Helplessly.

Timelessly.

Careless about me.

Say those rude words.

than kill me with silence.

These silent actions,

cause me immense confusions..

Oh mon amour vrai [oh my true love]

cant find no way,

than to come your way.

please say those words to me,

I need them to breathe.

Words cant express,

what you mean to me.

Nor can my voice raise,

when you're close to me.

This is the moment of truth,

Hurt me....

with the truth.

Than comfort me...

with the lies.

Oh mon amour vrai [oh my true love]

cant find no way,

than to come your way.

please say those words to me,

I need them to breathe.

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

say those rude words, than kill me with your silence. I just wrote something on similar lines...wonderful!! The way you write is direct, to the point yet very deep. I like the passion and the honesty.

[Thea Fuentebella]

a rare kind of poem that definitely speaks to the reader. i loved this. very passionate and moving
so, as a fellow writer, i say to you...
Oh mon amour vrai :")

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Breath taking beautiful!!

Oh mon amour vrai (oh my true love)
cant find no way,
than to come your way.
please say those words to me,
I need them to breath.

Love It!!!! 100/100

[HopelesslyDevoted]

so deep and full of beauty!

[Apathy To Empathy]

I agree with MichelleClay.
She's right, 100%

[MichelleClay]

Hurt me....
with the truth.
Than comfort me...
with the lies.
Another great poem Sid. Your words express so much truth in love..

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This is beautiful my friend.