spring meadows

spring meadows

A Poem by siddhi
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in the spring meadows

"
i see some running shadows ,
all over the spring meadows.
butterflies everywhere, 
as long ,as i see in air.

smell of flowers ,over the seas,
in all continents, across the fields.
all animals coming ,
out of their longing sleep,
with new freshness as we see.

a small child just came to me ,
and asked ,"will you play with me",
i said ,"yes i will be ,
what you want me to be".

i wish i could live that day,
again and again,
in every second in every minute of my life,
can it be that happy day.

© 2015 siddhi


Author's Note

siddhi
do not hesitate i want true review.

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I love the imagery in this poem, the idea of freshness being seen rather smelt is intense and beautiful. Perhaps an extra stanza would have been useful to balance the theme of the poem, but nevertheless, this poem is beautiful.
I wonder if you would be able to check out my first poem on here?
Any reviews are much appreciated.
Once again, good work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Made me feel refreshing. A great attemp conveying affinity towards gifts of nature. Rhyming makes the poem more powerful. And Siddhi, I will surely siddhi tjat u carry on to write such beautiful poems.

Take care.

D

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou deevanshu i was so happy to see this review
this is your frnd
siddhi
Devanshu Rajput

4 Years Ago

You're most welcome.

D
Made me feel refreshing. A great attemp conveying affinity towards gifts of nature. Rhyming makes the poem more powerful. And Siddhi, I will surely siddhi tjat u carry on to write such beautiful poems.

Take care.

D

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is a lovely poem with great sentiment. And you are so young!

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

yup i'm just in school
thankyou read more review more



siddhi
I really liked the poem siddhi but won't review my poem???I am Riddhi and i am also a teenager..I hope we siddhi and riddhi can become good friends...

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

yup riddhi i'll surely review your works soon and we even can become gud frnds
thankyou for r.. read more
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pb
oh,that was nice and kind..it's like u woke up one day and realized that life is beautiful in this season.
You know, my name's Pranvera, which it means Spring in English language, and has exactly the meaning of a season.
I liked that, thanks for writing this.

hugs,
pb

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thanks a lot pb in all my peoms this is my personal favrouite
i wrote it after seeing a progr.. read more
A sweet poem - I like the little 'i' - the innocence of its eyes.

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou solar
very beautiful & so sweet to listen too...
I was going in dreams in the middle of reading your poet.
It was so impactful : )
Tussi maan gaye kudiye ; )


Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou akki i liked your style
ky baat hat hai sahab
Akki

4 Years Ago

which style???
Pleasure is always mine.
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Like beautiful dream . Your words can cary me over any dark. Very beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou marketa .. read more
to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

Posted 4 Years Ago



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