river

river

A Poem by siddhi
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river is inspiring

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river never stops, 
it just rocks. 
sometime cool as snow, 
sometime hot as magma.

when it is cool, 
people think it is a pool. 
when it is hot,
it wash out all.

but river never stops it,
just keep on moving.
no matter what ,
all she is controlling.

© 2015 siddhi


Author's Note

siddhi
i know it is short but it is good please read it .

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Wow...Short but enough for attracting readers...and for connecting with readers..
The way you have described few qualities of river is amazing..
But I must say...it can be presented more beautifully...
All the best..
Keep writing..
Keep sharing..

Posted 2 Years Ago


to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is definitely a 100 point poem, I felt all warm and wishful inside reading it. You've written an AMAZING piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


small and beautiful... quality matters ...not the quantity

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

i know that's why i wrote this
thanks for reading and reviewing
short but really nice piece of work......

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou for reading and rewiewing
zunie frost

4 Years Ago

welcome !!!
Nice work siddhi..........

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

siddhi

4 Years Ago

thanks for reading and reviewing

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siddhi
siddhi

delhi, India



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