feelings

feelings

A Poem by siddhi
"

what are feelings

"
feelings are those happy sights,
feelings are unhappy lights.
feelings are cute,feelings are cries,
but are not every time right.

feelings are heartily lies,
feelings just sat for a while.
feelings are sweet,feelings are bright,
but also they are many time right.

feelings are something that we feel,
feelings let us to believe,
feelings tell us that we feel.
and also they get us to someone's heart,
which are straight from our heart. 

© 2015 siddhi


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siddhi
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can be good or bad

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Feelings are what make us on live. Without them we are nothing and our live will be empty. Thank you wrote such beautiful feelings for us.

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou so much kumi
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your frnd
siddhi
to every one please give true review
i want them so that i can add more beatiful writtings
this is a humble request

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is definitely a 100 point poem, I felt all warm and wishful inside reading it. You've written an AMAZING piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


very good....and meaning full

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thanyou knight rider
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Very Nice... and very true....


Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou very much
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Uthpel

4 Years Ago

My pleasure... :)
really nice ..... great flow and beauty

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

thankyou for reading and rewieing
zunie frost

4 Years Ago

Welcome!!!!!!!!
Nice write, can do better....

Posted 4 Years Ago


siddhi

4 Years Ago

it was like a free time peom
thanks for reading and reviewing
*straight. :)

Apart for that one spelling mistake, Great job Siddhi. A lovely poem about feelings. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


siddhi

5 Years Ago

thank you very much ,but what is that spelling mistake
Tej K

5 Years Ago

The word straight in the last line. :)

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siddhi

delhi, India



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