That Love

She wanted to say goodbye.

She needed to say goodbye,

but she couldn't let go.

Let go of that love

that rattled her bones

and left her speechless.

That love that moved her world

and made her feel

like the universe belonged to her.

She loved it when 

he would look into her eyes

and called her beautiful,

and when he would

trace her figure with his fingers

giving her spine the chills.

But she had to let it all go,

All those feelings and emotions,

she had to give them up.

For his love for her was no more

and even though his love was

nonexistent

She knew hers would remain

until the end of time.

Reviews

[ANTO]

Love lies bleeding - hard to step into her shoes here and to feel that feeling of not being able to do anything to change things and to know that the best she can wish for is an early release.
Fine writing Tannia

[Danielle]

You did great. I think we've all experienced this 'have to let it go' feeling that is so hard to follow. Great job explaining this feeling!

[Silent Heart]

Thank You !

[Danielle]

Your welcome!😄

[Lizardo]

Amazing poem it really grabbed my Atention, I really like it
You did a great job writing this nice piece of work!

[Silent Heart]

Thank you so so much ! It's comMents like this that make me want to keep writing ! THANKS !