True Friends Stab You From the Front.

True Friends Stab You From the Front.

A Poem by Silent Pacer

 

 

Tumult of the mind,

Utter riots of mental stability.

This is what happens,

When your words penetrate my thoughts.

 

Lies! Lies! Lies!

My mind screams at you viscously.

But you show no care,

Because I aim not to hurt you.

 

Sit in my mind,

My words of venom.

As you say your’s aloud,

Because your only concern is you.

 

You show no hesitancy,

In affronting your friend,

You say lies factually,

Throwing the pity card, when I try advert.

 

And seem to know,

What you cant possibly see.

Let me be me, friend,

And I’ll let you be you.

 

 

© 2008 Silent Pacer


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This poem has a lot of meaning and power to it. What you say is true, and true friend should have the strength within themselfs to stab a friend in the front it they're going to. They shouldn't linger in the shadow and wait untill you've passed. They shouldn't say anything unless they have the courage to actually confront you and say it to your face.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very True I Believe The Same Views As Everyone Should Be Who They Are...No Fake Fronts...No Smiles That Behead Your Feelings....Loved It!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this poem too and you're right true friends will stab you from the front. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem has a lot of meaning and power to it. What you say is true, and true friend should have the strength within themselfs to stab a friend in the front it they're going to. They shouldn't linger in the shadow and wait untill you've passed. They shouldn't say anything unless they have the courage to actually confront you and say it to your face.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have such a beautiful and creative way of penning strong emotion to page , that I find it hard to believe that you are not an old, wise and well traveled confidant. You have taken the advice that once a gave and ran with it. Creating an elagent and powerful message for all to be lost in. Capturing your reader and holding their attention on your terms. "Let me be me, friend,And I�ll let you be you. " I love this line. This wisdom will carry you far in this harsh world.
Great Job !

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, yes the rivarly friendship, it can only be continued when two people work at becoming one, if both do not work at it, its merly nothing but an aquntense gone bad.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so much truth inside the words. i think you have great tallent in weaving words together to become beautiful pieces of art.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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