my love

how are you so perfect

your coldness pressed against me leaves me breathless

as you trace across my skin i can not help but shiver

did you know that i love you more then any other

when i forget how to breathe i come to you

you always make me realize how alive i am

i could hold you forever against me

as you trace across my thigh

a moan escapes my lips

and the pain exits

ruby drops

for you

 

 

Reviews

[Blossom]

very impressive. love the shape. add more impact to the poem

[Claws Of Fury]

Ultra impressive. I love how perfect you made this shape to become. I love it. I do.

[Leanne Conway]

Miluji formát, který jste vybrali. Krásná báseň zlato.