Monster

To call you a monster is far too harsh.

But my love that is exactly what you are.

Irresistibly evil, deliciously fatal.

With your intoxicating smile, and your heavenly face.

You could steal away my heart with one glance.

Whisper in my ear again how I am the only one for you.

Cloud my head with your lies so I can die with a smile.

Like a sirens song no one can resist.

I offer you my soul, my life, anything you wish.

Your fleeting kisses and whispered ‘I love you’.

Leave me begging for more.

I want to be as irresistible to you as you are to me.

Scream how much you love me.

Eat me alive.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a really nice write. I really think you did a wonderful job on this. It was also pretty powerful in my opinion. It was also deep and it came from your heart.Thanks for sharing. :)

ravaging for more! nice work!

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

OMG!!!!!!! Totally LOVE this =D 'tis an awesome write

[RonnieBreight]

This makes me think of drugs.
"Scream how much you love me. Eat me alive."
That's so... intimate and emotional. I like how your poem was filled with flavor. You did a really good job. :).

[David W Moore III]

Devoured by She. Tentacles delving to the core. Pulsing. Throbbing. A monster in name. There is no escape. And who'd want to anyway.